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【托福口语】托福口语真实答题范例,原来20/25/30分的差距在这...

2023-04-18 16:02:49 发布 来源:雷哥托福

很多考生都被托福口语困扰,除了托福口语难度大之外,考生们更是想要寻求满分回答的范例,来提升自己的口语表达。


今天为大家整理了不同分数的独立口语回答范例,让同学们直观感受一下0-4分的回答是什么样的,自己和满分回答的差距又在哪里?


在干货内容开始前,先给同学们科普一下,为什么托福口语有0-30分和0-4分之说。


托福口语的总分会通过计算每道题考官和系统给出分数的平均分。再取4道题的分数的平均分作为口语整个部分最终的分数(raw score)。最终通过对分表,将 raw score(0-4)转换为 scaled score(0-30)


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图片

0分回答


image.png

0分回答特征:考生没有回答问题或回答内容与题目无关。


所以只要我们在托福独立部分尝试着回答问题,哪怕句意不清楚,逻辑杂糅,但raters听到了一些和题目相关的关键词,都一定能得1分。只要每一道题我们都回答了问题,根据分数换算表,最低口语部分也能得到6-8分。




1分回答

Describe a class you have taken in school and explain why the class was important to you. Include details and examples to support your explanation. 


When I was a freshman, I was sold my new shoes and I thought it well why my parents sold my shoes. I wondered they don’t know the. So now I registered a lecture psychology, so I could know the reason why my parent take my shoes.


1分回答特征:逻辑十分受限,整体表达碎片化,有使用模板的痕迹,语音不自然。

Deliverysold的发音并不清晰。内容断断续续,大面积空白
Language use:词汇语法严重受限,表述非常单薄
Topic development没有表述哪门课程重要,以及重要的原因,无法源源不断的去表达内容和观点,过度依赖题目给出的提示。


image.png




2分回答

Describe a class you have taken in school and explain why the class was important to you. Include details and examples to support your explanation.

One class I had last semester is information modeling. This course was very important to me , cause many job I do is modeling. I gained experiences and some theories, and this area. And also introduced new techniques and principles of the way of the new modeling techniques.


这个回答有种种发音、语法和展开上的问题,但我们知道考生在尝试描述information modeling这节课。这个回答长度仅有47个词,会影响Delivery和Topic development两方面的得分。


Delivery:发音有问题,如many,and,also等词的发音,另外一些词尾音过长,影响整体节奏。

Language use:在词汇的使用上有局限性,and also这一句存在问题且缺乏主语,存在语法问题

Topic development:没有描述什么是 information modeling,并且并没有通过细节解释学到新知识和对考生重要的关系,所以整体展开受限。


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3分回答

Some universities require first year students to live in dormitories on campus. Others allow students to live off campus. Which policy do you think is better and why? Include details and examples in your explanation.


I think the better policy is to make student live in the dorm, because the first year student live in the dorm, because I think they can be safer first, because they are from most of them are come from other town, so they don’t really know the environment. so I think it safer. huh, moreover I think they can make friends in the dorm so they can have a good relationship to know on the, on the university’s is, the goal I mean, they know better the environment. Especially they don’t have cars.


Delivery:有一些发音上的小错误,回答停顿处稍多,但基本不影响整体理解;
Language use:有一定的语法错误,词汇和句式稍受限,但基本不影响理解;
Topic development:答案结构较为完整,回答了问题,并给出了一定的理由,但是缺乏细节支撑。

虽然不是满分也有一定的缺陷,但也是一个不错的成绩,因为如果我们在speaking section中的4道题都能拿到3分,最后的口语总分也有22-23分左右。


image.png




4分回答

Some universities require first year students to live in dormitories on campus. Others allow students to live off campus. Which policy do you think is better and why? Include details and examples in your explanation.

I think it’s better for the first year students to live on campus rather than off campus. Main reason because they are new to the city and it safer for them to live on campus where there’s more security. Because they don’t know much about the city in the first place. Second of all, it helps them to become more familiar with the surroundings where they have to study. It also helps them to meet new people. Living in the dorm encourages friendships with people who you might not seem very comfortable with first time. And it helps to meet new people, it helps to interact with the seniors if any live in your dorm.


⭐Delivery:虽然有一些口音,但是整体清晰流畅,连贯性好,发音不错,很容易让人听懂speaker表达的内容。
⭐Language use:词汇使用恰当,语法能够准确表达观点,句子结构完整并且具有一定的多样性。
⭐Topic development:答案结构完整,考生能够恰当地回答了问题,并且有一定的细节来支撑自己的观点。

image.png


为了方便大家理解记忆,将独立口语每个分数段回答内容的特点进行总结:
0分:考生没有张嘴说话,或回答内容和题目无关。

1分:考生尝试回答了问题,但是没有给出问题的答案,语言运用和语言表达很难听懂。

2分:考生给出了问题的回答,有尝试给出一定的理由来支撑观点,但是没有细节。语言的流利度和语言表达受限,影响整体理解。

3分:考生回答了问题,并给出了一定的理由来支撑观点,但是细节不够充分或细节间的逻辑杂糅。语言运用和语言表达较好,虽然会犯错但不严重影响整体理解。

4分:考生回答了问题,并给出了充分的理由和细节来解释自己的观点。语言运用和语言表达不错,虽然会犯一些小错误,但不影响整体理解。

虽然托福口语是难项,但是相信大家通过不断练习一定会有所进步,同时要依照托福口语的评分标准,了解得分项,答出考官和机器考官都喜欢的答案,相信你一定可以达到托福口语25+的好成绩。


上一篇:【托福培训】托福口语做到这几点,每道题都是Good 下一篇:




雷哥托福>托福口语>【托福口语】托福口语真实答题范例,原来20/25/30分的差距在这...

【托福口语】托福口语真实答题范例,原来20/25/30分的差距在这...

2023-04-18 16:02:49 发布 来源: 雷哥托福 5364阅读

很多考生都被托福口语困扰,除了托福口语难度大之外,考生们更是想要寻求满分回答的范例,来提升自己的口语表达。


今天为大家整理了不同分数的独立口语回答范例,让同学们直观感受一下0-4分的回答是什么样的,自己和满分回答的差距又在哪里?


在干货内容开始前,先给同学们科普一下,为什么托福口语有0-30分和0-4分之说。


托福口语的总分会通过计算每道题考官和系统给出分数的平均分。再取4道题的分数的平均分作为口语整个部分最终的分数(raw score)。最终通过对分表,将 raw score(0-4)转换为 scaled score(0-30)


image.png


图片

0分回答


image.png

0分回答特征:考生没有回答问题或回答内容与题目无关。


所以只要我们在托福独立部分尝试着回答问题,哪怕句意不清楚,逻辑杂糅,但raters听到了一些和题目相关的关键词,都一定能得1分。只要每一道题我们都回答了问题,根据分数换算表,最低口语部分也能得到6-8分。




1分回答

Describe a class you have taken in school and explain why the class was important to you. Include details and examples to support your explanation. 


When I was a freshman, I was sold my new shoes and I thought it well why my parents sold my shoes. I wondered they don’t know the. So now I registered a lecture psychology, so I could know the reason why my parent take my shoes.


1分回答特征:逻辑十分受限,整体表达碎片化,有使用模板的痕迹,语音不自然。

Deliverysold的发音并不清晰。内容断断续续,大面积空白
Language use:词汇语法严重受限,表述非常单薄
Topic development没有表述哪门课程重要,以及重要的原因,无法源源不断的去表达内容和观点,过度依赖题目给出的提示。


image.png




2分回答

Describe a class you have taken in school and explain why the class was important to you. Include details and examples to support your explanation.

One class I had last semester is information modeling. This course was very important to me , cause many job I do is modeling. I gained experiences and some theories, and this area. And also introduced new techniques and principles of the way of the new modeling techniques.


这个回答有种种发音、语法和展开上的问题,但我们知道考生在尝试描述information modeling这节课。这个回答长度仅有47个词,会影响Delivery和Topic development两方面的得分。


Delivery:发音有问题,如many,and,also等词的发音,另外一些词尾音过长,影响整体节奏。

Language use:在词汇的使用上有局限性,and also这一句存在问题且缺乏主语,存在语法问题

Topic development:没有描述什么是 information modeling,并且并没有通过细节解释学到新知识和对考生重要的关系,所以整体展开受限。


image.png



3分回答

Some universities require first year students to live in dormitories on campus. Others allow students to live off campus. Which policy do you think is better and why? Include details and examples in your explanation.


I think the better policy is to make student live in the dorm, because the first year student live in the dorm, because I think they can be safer first, because they are from most of them are come from other town, so they don’t really know the environment. so I think it safer. huh, moreover I think they can make friends in the dorm so they can have a good relationship to know on the, on the university’s is, the goal I mean, they know better the environment. Especially they don’t have cars.


Delivery:有一些发音上的小错误,回答停顿处稍多,但基本不影响整体理解;
Language use:有一定的语法错误,词汇和句式稍受限,但基本不影响理解;
Topic development:答案结构较为完整,回答了问题,并给出了一定的理由,但是缺乏细节支撑。

虽然不是满分也有一定的缺陷,但也是一个不错的成绩,因为如果我们在speaking section中的4道题都能拿到3分,最后的口语总分也有22-23分左右。


image.png




4分回答

Some universities require first year students to live in dormitories on campus. Others allow students to live off campus. Which policy do you think is better and why? Include details and examples in your explanation.

I think it’s better for the first year students to live on campus rather than off campus. Main reason because they are new to the city and it safer for them to live on campus where there’s more security. Because they don’t know much about the city in the first place. Second of all, it helps them to become more familiar with the surroundings where they have to study. It also helps them to meet new people. Living in the dorm encourages friendships with people who you might not seem very comfortable with first time. And it helps to meet new people, it helps to interact with the seniors if any live in your dorm.


⭐Delivery:虽然有一些口音,但是整体清晰流畅,连贯性好,发音不错,很容易让人听懂speaker表达的内容。
⭐Language use:词汇使用恰当,语法能够准确表达观点,句子结构完整并且具有一定的多样性。
⭐Topic development:答案结构完整,考生能够恰当地回答了问题,并且有一定的细节来支撑自己的观点。

image.png


为了方便大家理解记忆,将独立口语每个分数段回答内容的特点进行总结:
0分:考生没有张嘴说话,或回答内容和题目无关。

1分:考生尝试回答了问题,但是没有给出问题的答案,语言运用和语言表达很难听懂。

2分:考生给出了问题的回答,有尝试给出一定的理由来支撑观点,但是没有细节。语言的流利度和语言表达受限,影响整体理解。

3分:考生回答了问题,并给出了一定的理由来支撑观点,但是细节不够充分或细节间的逻辑杂糅。语言运用和语言表达较好,虽然会犯错但不严重影响整体理解。

4分:考生回答了问题,并给出了充分的理由和细节来解释自己的观点。语言运用和语言表达不错,虽然会犯一些小错误,但不影响整体理解。

虽然托福口语是难项,但是相信大家通过不断练习一定会有所进步,同时要依照托福口语的评分标准,了解得分项,答出考官和机器考官都喜欢的答案,相信你一定可以达到托福口语25+的好成绩。


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