正确审题

①审标题中的单词，避免题目还没看懂就开始写，更别谈跑题、偏题了

②看题不仔细，题目中的关键信息、限定词汇没有重视。例如：

In today's world,the ability to cooperate well with others is moreimportant than before.Do you agree or disagree?

这个题目中的核心词汇包括cooperate以及than before。很多学生在行文过程中，都忽略了对before这个词的解读。全文都在谈如今合作有多么重要，而没有与过去为什么合作不那么重要进行对比。

因此，学姐建议大家拿到题目，先问自己一个问题，这个题目的话题词是什么？有没有对比信息？有没有限定词？从现在起，带着这些问题开始写作。

举例在托福独立写作中扮演着非常重要的角色。在最新版《托福考试官方指南》的满分评分标准中有着明确且充分的体现：”well organized and well developed, using clearly appropriateexplanations, exemplifications, and/or details.”

从托福独立写作的策略来说，举例的三大好处：①真实可信②生动有趣③充实饱满

下面学姐为大家例举2种常用类型的词汇：

1.描述现象时用到的词汇：

Such as/like/include/range from…to…/for example/for instance

2.叙述故事时用到的举例词汇

Illustrate/exemplify/deserves a special mention

1.数字/单词如何区分用在合适的地方

①12以下的数字一般都用英文表示

② （percent）百分比前用阿拉伯数字，例如：5percent

③当数字需要两个以上英文单词表达时用阿拉伯数字表示。例如：125千米=125 kilometers

④年份都用阿拉伯数字

⑤句子开头不用阿拉伯数字

⑥小数、分数用数字。例如：1240万元= $12.4 million

写作结尾不能成为整个文章的拖油瓶，应在总结全文的基础上，增加笔墨，对文章主题进行升华。

哪些方法可以升华主题呢？

1.预测未来趋势

针对社会热点类话题，可以适当预测该话题整个发展趋势，强化作者本身强烈的立场。

2.提出建议、解决办法

3.增强语气

同学们可以尝试用反问句来使文章结尾升华噢~

花点心思在文章结尾上，这是你文章提分的关键点，切莫草草收场！

1.刻意使用复杂词汇

把握不到位易翻车

2.生搬硬套复杂句子结构

一篇好文章应是水到渠成，并不是好句式就一定能得高分，读上去顺畅、长句短句结合才是王道。

3.论证忽视例子的作用

切莫用纯理论支撑论据，若没有例子作为论据这将成为一大扣分点。

托福独立写作要求考生利用30分钟写300字左右的文章，我们需要知道托福独立写作常考话题，以下是十类常考话题及题目举例：

1.全球化影响

There is a disagreement on the impact of increased business andculture contact between countries on a country’s identity. What is youropinion?

2.政府投资

People should keep all the money theyearn and should not pay taxes to the state. Do you agree or disagree?

3.科技影响

Many employees may work at home withmodern technol**y. Some people claim that it benefits only workers, but notemployers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

4.文化类

It is more important for a building toserve its purposes than to look beautiful. Architects do not need to worryabout whether it is a real work of art. Do you agree or disagree?

5.生活工作

Some people think that changing jobsperiodically is good. What is your opinion?

6.传媒类

Some people suggest that there shouldbe restrictions on a detailed description of crimes in the newspapers and ontelevision. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

7. 广告类

There are many advertisements directedat children. Parents argue that children are misled, while advertisers consideradvertising a source of useful information. What is your opinion?

8.环境类

It is said that the best way to solvethe world’s environmental problems is to increase the price of fuel. To whatextent do you agree or disagree?

9. 动物类

Far too little has been done to preventanimals and plants from dying out, although people have noticed this problemfor a long time. Why have people failed to improve this situation? What areyour suggestions?

10. 教育类

Some people believe that educating children all together will benefit them. Others think intelligent children should be taught separately and given special courses. Discuss both views and giveyour own opinion.

写作就像盖房子一样，关键词与句式只是钢筋结构，起着框架性的作用，换句话说，光掌握关键词与句式是不够的——要想在托福独立写作中取得高分，准确的用词、过硬的语法基础都是不可或缺的，希望大家能够在平时多加积累与练习，为备战托福打下坚实的基础。