国内考生托福写作的平均分在18分左右，显然不够理想。

b. We should treasure and memorize our history.【动词并列】

c. The journey itself is fascinating and meaningful. 【形容词并列】

接下来我们用前面给出的大作文来示范一下词汇并列的方法。

Internet, like roads, should be maintained by governments.

Internet is really convenient.

Free Internet will greatly encourage citizens to use it.

有些考生担心这里添加的词汇会显得重复和啰嗦，为此给出两点说明：

不少同学的句子干巴巴的，一点修饰都没有。修饰具体来说有词汇修饰和从句&分词修饰。本篇讲的词汇添加第2个方法指的就是在名词之前添加形容词。

仍旧是上述大作文的例句升级：

1）I disagree with this suggestion. 

开头段万能套话，可用加形容词的方式显得与众不同

改：I disagree with this seemingly plausible suggestion. （貌似可信的）

2）This can be illustrated with the story of mine. 

举例万能开头句

改：This can be vividly illustrated with the personal experience of mine.

3）After having his computer, Tom could learn knowledge by himself.

改：After having his own computer, Tom could learn large amounts of new knowledge by himself.

方法三 ｜ 动词或形容词前加副词

同形容词的情形一样，不少考生的文章里几乎没有副词，因为很多人可能并没有意识到副词的存在。

副词可以修饰两种句子成分：形容词，以及动词。所以大家可以在使用这两种词汇的时候（必然会用到）考虑是否可以进一步用副词修饰。

1）Then they are likely to be addicted to Internet.

改：Then they are highly likely to be extremely addicted to Internet.

2）The money owned by the government is limited.

改：The money owned by the government is undeniably limited.

常用于修饰动词和形容词的副词

• Undoubtedly / definitely / surely / indeed

• Extremely / dramatically / enormously / fairly

• Clearly / apparently / obviously

• Surprisingly / astonishingly
  
  

词汇添加的方法不止上述三种，比如介词词组的添加，分词的添加等；但掌握了上述三种词汇添加的方法，必定会在一定程度上解决语言平淡的困境。

分论点：免费网络有助于学生学习

Free Internet certainly will be a significant and effective contributor to students’ study. When students and their parents need to pay for the Internet, students from relatively poor family could not afford the fee and thus lose plenty of valuable educational resources. That is a major reason why they could not possibly compete with the rich students. If internet is free, all of the students, especially the poor ones, could take full advantage of the infinite and precious online resources. Needless to say, their academic performance will be significantly benefited and enhanced.