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写作问题无非四种：1.结构混乱2.找不到理由去支持观点 3.理由和main point有脱节4.找得到合适理由，但是阐释不好。

前3点都是思路技巧性问题，一旦点通就几乎不会很很大问题。但是这第三点就是硬伤了。语言基础不够，再多的技巧和思路也是空的。

那么语言基础包括的就是你词汇和句子的掌握情况。词汇问题1 本身不了解托福作文常考哪些话题，缺少话题基本的需要具备的词汇；2.平常的通用词汇，比如引出观点的词只会用think，不知道在符合语义下用其它词语进行替换，比如argue；又或者是不考虑语义区别，直接用announce替换了think。

接下来我们就看一个具体作文例子，来感受一下词汇积累和替换的重要性。

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your idea.

Here is a view that the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Different people have different opinions. In my opinion, I agree with this view.

First, I can prepare the tour easier with the help of a tour guide. When I go to a new place, I usually know little about this place. And the places selected by the tour guild are always representative places, from which I can learn a lot. If there is no tour guide, I have to set a schedule by my own. It is too tiring.

Second, I think it is much safer with a tour guide. There are many dangers in a new place. For instance, the order of some places is not so good in the evening and some places are always dangerous. I may run into problems if I do not know so well about these kinds of places. If a tour guide told me about this, I can avoid possible accidents.

Third, I can still have free time in such a tour. A tour lead by a travel guide is no longer a tour without free time for customers. One can have at least 2 days for DIY activities in a 5 day long tour. So I can still enjoy myself. In these free days, I can visit somewhere special, go shopping or just hanging around.

All in all, traveling in a group is the most suitable way to travel around for me. Because it is more convenient and safer, and it also has free time for personal arrangements.

在这篇文章中，我们可以非常明显得感受到用词是非常单一的。作文题目就提到了旅游是不是跟团更好。那么这样一个话题，旅游话题，就有一些我们难以规避的词汇，这就叫话题词汇。比如导游，题目中用的是tour guide,那么我们文章中很多地方都提到了导游这个词语，发现我除了题目中给的tour guide,根本想不到还可以怎么样表达导游，导致整篇文章有点乏味了。那么在第一次提到tour guide之后，后面只说guide,读者也明白我说的是tour guide,不是别的guide.所以我们根据具体语境，把后面有些tour guide中的tour省略掉，会显得更加简略，不会很啰嗦。当然，比如换成lead也可以，但是guide会更符合常用表达。那么除了导游这个表达，我们还可以积累一些其它用到概率比较大的词汇。比如：景点（scenic spot，attraction)、历史文化遗产(historical and cultural heritage)、自然遗产(nature heritage)等。

其次，通用词汇问题。

在第一段，表示观点立场，不仅仅只有view，比如还有standpoint，idea，opinion，statement，argument等等，可以根据具体语境选择一个符合上下文感情态度的词语。

比如，我们在尊重作者原意的基础上，稍微进行词汇表达上面的修改。

Here is a view that the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Different people have different opinions. Personally, I agree with this statement.

接着文章中很多地方都提到了place，那么表示地方地域的词语可以有很多，比如area，或者讲到的是城市，我们可以很具体就说是city，可以不再用place这样宽泛的词语。比如第二和第三段，我可以改成

First, I can prepare the tour easier with the help of a tour guide. When I go to a new place, I usually know little about this it. And the points selected by the tour guild are always representative attractions, from which I can learn a lot. If there is no tour guide, I have to set a schedule by my own. It is too tiring.

Second, I think it is much safer with a tour guide. There are many dangers in a new place. For instance, the order of some districts is not so good in the evening and some communities are always dangerous. I may run into problems if I do not know so well about these kinds of areas. If a tour guide told me about this, I can avoid possible accidents.

以上就是对于托福写作词汇部分的小剖析，如果大家真是遇到了词汇的以上两个方面问题的话，那就要开始积累话题词汇和通用词汇了，从基础上开始提升写作才是解决写作问题的根本。

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